コーチのフィードバック
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言語スキル
試験スコアの目安
総合フィードバック
Overall, excellent job! It was a pleasure speaking about your life as an interpreter, your educational background, and your passion for video games. Your pronunciation and grammar were strong. Your main opportunity for improvement is to use a wider range of vocabulary and more varied sentence structures.
良かった点: Clear pronunciation, including unfamiliar vocabulary, and consistently accurate grammar.
対人スキル
コーチが評価する項目です
Humor
コーチからのフィードバック待ち
Reciprocity
コーチからのフィードバック待ち
Courtesy
コーチからのフィードバック待ち
Body language
コーチからのフィードバック待ち
Today I Learned
今回のレッスンで学んだポイントと、次の会話で使える例です。
Choose more precise vocabulary
“Adept at coding” communicates your ability more clearly than “very good at programming.”
Match the verb to your intended action
“Transfer into another area of study” is more specific than “get me into whatever major.”
Make broad descriptions concrete
“Engaged in physical activity” makes “more active” easier for a listener to understand.
詳しいフィードバック
コーチが流暢さに関する3つの修正を選びました。
01 / Fluency
I wasn't very good at programming overall. Most of my friends have already been prepped for these programming classes.
In comparison to my peers, who have immersed themselves in rigorous programming classes, I was not very adept at coding.
コーチのコメント
“Adept” means very skilled. More specific vocabulary and varied sentence structures can make a spoken response clearer and more expressive.
02 / Fluency
I told my mom to get me into whatever major seems okay.
After my tenure as a pre-med student, I asked my mother to transfer me into another academic area of study, one that also appealed to her.
コーチのコメント
“Transfer” better fits a change of academic major, while “appealed to her” is more natural and specific than “seems okay.”
03 / Fluency
Before the pandemic, I used to be more active.
Prior to the pandemic, I regularly engaged in physical activity.
コーチのコメント
Try “prior to” as an alternative to “before.” Naming the activity also helps listeners understand what “active” means.
デモ用レポートです。修正例とスコアは過去のサンプル資料に基づき、Ioanaコーチによる評価ではありません。